Kumori Alexander [finished]

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† Kumori - Shawn - Alexander †

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† General Information †

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Full Name: Kumori Shawn Alexander
Nicknames: Kiki, dragon, dark
Gender: Female
Race: Werewolf
Age: 37 years
Age they appear: 19 years
Occupation: unemployed
Orientation: Heterosexual
Health Problems: schizophrenia, pyromaniac

† Personality †

Basic Personality: Kumori is the most fierce werewolf to have ever been brought into existance, since she was a pup she bullied her brothers and sisters, her parents were worried about her, when they should've worried about themselves. If they had killed Kumori as a pup they'd still be breathing but no such luck. Kumori, by the age of 3, had killed many different beings- vamps, werewolves, and humans- for no reason, merely for sport. Kumori however mean she may appear, is not. Kumori is still looking for a challenge, but most of all she is looking for the right male to spend the rest of her life with, after having tasted that kind of life, she wishes to return to such a life, raise kids and die a happy person. Besides, Females seem to be the only ones that have to face the wrath of Kumori, males seem quite safe from her shredding claws and tearing fangs. Of course Kumori has a soft spot for pups-kids-, I mean who wouldn't? The lucky Male that Kumori decides to take as her mate, wiould have the kindest, and overall most loyal person to have ever been granted life.
Likes:
† meats (mostly steak
† Music (mostly rock)
† playing with fire
† drawing
† playing with guns

Hates:
† cocky humans and vampires
† anyone who messes with her music, lighters or guns
† veggies (yuck!)
† humans and vamps that think they're better than her
† cats! whether they be strays or pets

Talents:
† Running
† Fighting
† Shooting
† Hunting
† Obedience

Habits:
† singing without music
† biting (very bad habit)
† growling/mumbling to herself
† acting tomboyish
† running off without reason (another bad habit)
† collecting shiny things

† Appearance †

Skin Color: pale
Hair Color: black with red highlights
Eye Color: blue
Build: muscular, athletic
Piercings/Scars/Tattoos: three slanted claw marks on her hips, both sides
Choice of Clothing: dark clothing with skulls, dragons, bats, and/or dogs on them. chains, chokers, and/or spikes as accessories. only vans for shoes. anything black, red, dark purple, and/or gray
Wolf Appearance: lean muscular and somewhat athletic. Thick black pelt with a long red mane (streak) down her neck and a red bang over her right eye. long legs for running, slightly longer than normal tail, overly large ears (like a bat's), black claws, and long, large, and sharp ivory fangs that hang an inch over her bottom lip.
Other: 4'2'' at her shoulder 232 pounds as a wolf.

† History †

History: since she was young this one was a trouble maker, stealing food, picking fights with other pups. She alone tore her parents apart, though she was always loved by her father, her mother openly despised her, they fought often. Kumori, killed her mother with a shot to the head, then she burned her body and burried the ashes. Her father never knew of what happened to his wife, and in their pack he was alpha male so he always had someone trying to claim the alpha female spot and become his mate, which meant that there was a lot of trouble for kumori. sometimes she could handle it but others she need her father's help to avoid dying at the fangs of a female wolf wanting her mother's place.
Mother: Sarah
Father: Damion
Siblings: silver, ace, and marie
Offspring: none
Other: --

† RP example †

(taken from my post on hell on earth with Astral as Hellsinger)

Hellsinger lifted her head, she had been relaxing in the sun since it had risen, she felt a bit burnt, but nothing serious. her auds swivled around and her crimson orbs took in the sights. she saw 5 humans, one had a completly different scent from the others, it was almost as if he were dead. "a comrade?"she thought. She stood and shooke her fur to free the dirt and rocks that clung to it, the she looked over the humans "i suppose you'll do as snacks till i can find some real food"she growled. her fur bristled as she growled, four of the humans ran, she chased one as the others scattered, they all seemed unarmed, lucky break for her. her paws carried her quickly, she jumped in the air, and landed with and loud thud on all fours in front of the human, who had stummbled backwards and fell. she put her heavy paw on his chest her fangs dripped with drool. she could smell the delicious fear in this human, this made her smile "kill him what are you wating for!" a voice said to her "no, i think i'll toy with him for a bit, it's been awhile since i've caught anything worth playing with".

She threw the human into the air and watched him squirm to try and balance himself, she smirked and swatted at him with her paw, she felt his arm break and heard that beautiful snapping sound as it did. The melodious sound of his screams echoed in her ears, she laughed, as she snapped the humans legs, then she swatted at him again and again, like a cat plays with a ball of yarn, making him roll around in the dirt. she soon grew tired of her toy, and just ended his life by severing his head. she chewed it a bit but spit out the head and began to devour the body. she tore small chunks from it and looked at the wierd human that she had left standing in the distance, she left her kill to go investigate the strange being.

† Let's talk about you †

Name: ~*SIN*~
Other Characters: N/A
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[AKREE]

Revise...
There’s a few things you need to fix, don’t worry it’s not anything mayor.

…and a red bang over her right eye…

† You might excuse me, but I am quite sure there’s no such thing as a wolf with bangs, so you might want to edit that.

† Also, for the history you need 200 words, which is really not that hard to obtain, your history seems pretty basic, I’m sure you could add about a few things. Like, why did she kill her parents? How did she feel upon killing them? How did she end up in London? Was her father’s mate cruel? Was he kind? Was Kumori simply jealous? Did it bother her how her father took another mate? You have 130 words, so it’s not like you’ll be forced to add oodles and oodles.